Tuesday, 5 October 2010

Lyric Breakdown

The lyric breakdown shows what we are exactly going to do on each line of the song. This makes it easier for us when we are filming and editing the footage as our group will know where to slot each clip in and will make the lip syncing easier.

Narrative starts with boy and girl ending their relationship and girl walking away, as the pace quickens it cuts to studio to show a band.


Let's go!! Meat shot of singer


Cross cuts between the band in the studio and the crowd in club.


I said a 1,2,3 Quick cuts between three different females

take my hand and come with me Cut to man holding out his hand to lead one of the females away

'Cause you look so fine

And I really wanna make you mine. Goes back to the studio when it gets to the word “mine” cuts back to club. Shows the man leading the girl away and he turns to the camera and winks.


It pans then cuts to the studio

I said you look so fine

And I really wanna make you mine.


Oh, 4,5,6 come on and get your kicks Quick cuts of the club

Now you dont need that money

When you look like that, do ya honey? Goes to a women at the bar ordering a drink till a man comes over and pays for her drink


Big black boots, close up cuts of a female show her boots going up

Long brown hair, cutting close ups going down woman’s hair

She's so sweet Cut zoom in to actress to show facial expression

With her get back stare. Camera tracks away fast


Back to studio to show long shot of band performing


Well I could take, Meat shot of lead vocalist

You home with me, Club toilets, man walks in

But you were with another man, point of view shot of man, showing the girl he likes in a cubicle with another man yeah! Close up of mans face to show emotion.

I know we ain't got, much to say, Studio, pan of band

Before I let you get away, yeah! Cut to club, man walks away, woman follows


I said, are you gonna be my girl? All close-ups of different people, each speaking a different word


Instrumental (10 secs): Point of view shot from last person to show girl he was talking to walk away.


Cut back to studio


Well, so 1,singer 2,guitar 3, drummer take my hand and come with me boy approaches girl,

Because you look so fine medium shot of back of boy, girl looking over his shoulders

And I really wanna make you mine. Girl starts to smile, boy shows relief


I said you look so fine Girl mimes as other girl walks over

And I really wanna make you mine. Other girl hands drink over, boy looks shocked


Girls kiss


Oh, 4,5,6 cuts of studio come on and get your kicks shot of boy showing his reaction change

Now you dont need that money girls pull away, and look at boy

With a face like that, do ya... girl 1 pulls second girl away and boy follows


People dancing


Big black boots, studio, drummer

Long brown hair, studio, guitarist

She's so sweet meat shot vocalist

With her get back stare. Slides to back to club


Well I could see, girl from beginning in garden with new man

You home with me, pull focus to show first man at door

But you were with another man, yeah! Studio

I know we ain't got, man walks towards ex much to say, Girl tries to pull away and man has her pinned

Before I let you get away, yeah! Man pushes nasty man away and scuffle

I said, are you gonna be my girl? Studio, Close up of song


Dipping shots of different couples and scenarios happening in club (28 sec instrumental)


Oh Yeah

Oh Yeah

C'mon

I could see, Band

You home with me, Band

But you were with another man, yeah!

I know we, ain't got much to say, Back to the boys, nasty man walks off and good one helps girl up

Before I let you get away, yeah!

Uh, be my girl.

Be my girl.

Are you gonna be my girl? Yeah! End on girl and boy kissing

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